Tell Me

More raw emotions..

Promised myself I wouldn't,
For him, I won't cry,
I thought I could be strong,
But here, on the floor... I lie.

I can't stop myself,
I have to calm down somehow,
I need to stop being weak,
I need to stop, right now.

All the shaky actions,
Insecurity is shining through,
The littlest things set me off,
Because I'm thinking of you.

I won't ever have closure,
'Til I know what I did wrong,
I can't stop the tears,
And I can't yet move on.

Something inside of me,
Has to know what I did...
Tell me what I did wrong,
Then of me, you may be rid.

I want to move on,
To find a real, loving guy,
Who loves me, only me,
And doesn't tell lie after lie.

Yes, tears fall down my face,
But not because I miss you.
Simply because, I never could see,
That your love for me wasn't true.

Reviews

[The Invisible Girl]

This poem is really good! It's packed with raw emotions.
My word of advice: Everything will be alright in the end! I promise you it probably wasn't your fault. If you need anyone to vent out your feeling you can message me or just write more well-written poems. Whatever suits you. :)
100/100

-Invisible Girl :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahaha, thank you, invisible girl (:

[The Invisible Girl]

You're welcome! :D

[MandaBear]

This poem is really good!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thanks, Amanda! I saw some read requests from you, what I've read so far of your work is good(: figured I'd tell you that I'm extremely slow with those requests, but I'll eventually get to it, promise, haha (:

[MandaBear]

Lol Your welcome! I am slow about Requests too.! You get to it when you get to it I am not worried! Your work is Awesome by the way.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Aww, thanks (:

[Annabelle Lee]

Great write. youre very talented

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you(: you are as well!

[Be myself!]

Wait.....the time will come when you meet your true love. Only he will be able to unlck the deepest parts of your soul. :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thanks (:

[Be myself!]

Your welcome!