Without a Sound

I'm sorry guys.. I'm still a mess. I guess y'all will just have to put up with me until I'm done venting through poetry :P I have more questions than answers, and writing helps me think. So, thanks (:

Those adorable little messages,
That immediately brought a smile,
The sound of his sweet voice,
That left me blushing for awhile...

Today's our eleven month,
Supposed to be special and happy,
He hasn't talked to me though,
So instead I'm sad and lonely.

Yeah, cute guys flirt sometimes,
But they don't matter to me,
I hardly notice them,
With him, is all I want to be.

I'm still extremely confused,
I call him my rock, but he's gone,
Not permanently, hopefully,
But... What exactly is going on?

What should I think?
Did I do something wrong?
I feel like I messed up a lot,
I don't even feel like I belong.

Can I just have some answers?
That's all I ask for, please...
I just don't know what I did,
Why is this happening to me?

Why can't love be perfect?
It's the biggest mystery of all,
Love is an uncharted territory,
And it's usually where I fall.

It's not that I don't know how,
It's just that I make mistakes,
So many mistakes cause problems,
And problems lead to heartbreak.

I want to pull out of this though,
I'm tired of losing ones I love,
A lot of them are my fault,
But when did push come to shove?

I have so many questions,
Answers are nowhere to be found,
Kind of like my love...
Who vanished without a sound.

Reviews

[Rahul]

This write could be a great write, i think it's a great song. I liked this big write... your efforts, your emotions, your truth as well as lie and your weakness as well as your strength .. all you've dropped in this piece. Nice work once again as usual :) 100/100.

[CindyLu]

Beautiful. The daunting uncertainity of love is probably the most overwhelming feeling in the world. And, of course, my father had a quote about it: "If you can love without heartbreak, you're not really loving at all" Love is a rollercoaster ride in the ocean. Sometimes you're flying, sometimes you're falling, occasionally you dip under water, but in the end, it was all about the experience. If you want to reach the end, you can't omit any part of it and you can't be afraid to ride. This poem is all about the fall, I think. Just remember what goes down must come up, eh? (:

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahha, I thought it was "what goes up must come down", but whatever :P thanks Cindy (: all of your dad's quotes seem so smart and true.

[CindyLu]

oh really? I thought it could go both ways... lol you're welcome :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahaha, maybe so :P

[kink]

hmm adorable ....maybe.
rock...? really ?? 0.o

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Yeah.. Like someone who is always there for me and is always strong for me..

[quinfinn]

this is a really good poem and the seventh stanza is the crux of the whole piece...it is brilliant! you have captured this emotion and disected the pitfalls of new love to perfection......

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you (:

[C.C. Marx]

GAHHH I wish I could help, I hate seeing all this sad poetry from you (although they are all fantastic). Don't let him keep you down, be young and crazy, not tied down to someone will only break your heart....nicely done

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahha, I hate seeing it from me too :P but thank you. I'm trying to move on, which seems pretty impossible, so now I'm just trying to distract myself as much as I possibly can, but it's still hard to not let my mind wonder. Gosh, I feel like Bella in New Moon, it's terrible :/

[C.C. Marx]

Trust me I get. Even though being pretty inexperienced in the relationship department (not much luck there, stop really trying) I understand heart break and moving on. The heart break hurts like hell but the moving on parts the real b***h (pardon my profanity)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahaha, I don't mind :P and yeah, I know what you mean. I just.. If it's going to be ended, I'd at least like to talk about things first :/

[C.C. Marx]

Im glad because sometimes my other language is profanity (only when im mad or emotional) and closure can help, I would advise talking to him unless he isn't the talking type then AVIOD AND FORGET. Also slamming him in poetry helps :P

[scripted]

i love how you mixed 2 feeling in this piece than ended with them tied together... i enjoyed reading this, and we all have problems with love:( if your love doesn't come back know that it's not meant to be, anyway thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you, Danielle!

[Angela ☄️]

I think maybe since he only hasn't talked to you for one day that maybe he's busy and it slipped his mind. (And believe me men are good for that) Just give it time...and as for the poem that you suggest that I read, it's amazing. You are a very skilled writer. :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

No, it's been over a day. And as for the "it Slipped his mind", that's never happened before, every anniversary he's remembered, sometimes even better than I. Oh well, hopefully things get better and I can go back to writing love poems.

[Angela ☄️]

Yes, I hope the best for you girl, even though I don't know you. :P I like to read love poems so keep on writing. :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

The love poems are probably over for awhile :/ now they'll probably only be about heartbreak, at least for now.

[Angela ☄️]

:( Well I hope they get better soon doll. *hugs*

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you, Angel. I'm just kinda still a huge mess, I don't know what in the world to do with myself.

[Angela ☄️]

Well I hope you the best on your way darling, and if you ever need advice I am available at all times. :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Alright, thank you (:

[Icelanna]

Aww, heartbreakingly good! Bless, I can feel the confusion depth of sadness and loss of something, in a way its mournful and it's a great piece. Don't worry my 12 month ended in disaster! But you'll put through! :) x
Love to you x

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you, Icelanna.

[Lino Rie]

Love the poem. Heartbreak comes with love most the time. It's like a law of love. It's only broken when you find the right guy and marry him. Hang in there you will find your prince charming some day.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you (:

[Aehr]

I like the emotions, the way they are portrayed here. good job. It's heartfelt, and pretty well written. Nice, emotional poem.
P.S = I know the feeling.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you Rhea.

[s y e]

Awwww. This was so touching and emotional. :( Beautifully written.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you.