No More Heartbreak

Just.. Writing. About.. Stuff. So yeah, tell me what you think.

I have poured my heart out,

My secrets have all been told,

I thought I was special,

You acted like I was gold.

 

That's the problem though,

It was all just an act,

My tears started streaming,

Couldn't help but react.

 

Many times over,

My heart has been broken,

My heart has been stolen,

And kept as a token.

 

I thought I was in love,

But I was completely wrong,

I feel stupid now,

Should've seen it all along.

 

It took true love, though,

To help me realize my mistake,

No longer will I fall for it,

Hopefully no more heartbreak.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

such a sweet and wonderfully constructed write, this is an improvement over previous writes...so much more real emotion and not as much unconnected feeling. i think you need to keep writing and hone your skills, because there is a flame of talent burning within you which should not be denied. well done, Amandaaa!!!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you!

[babygirl]

I think this was beautiful nice write

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you.

[babygirl]

Your welcome

[Moon]

Beautiful ! Amazing job Amanda !

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you!

[Moon]

You are welcome

[The Invisible Girl]

I love this poem! The words flowed beautifully together! Keep it up! :) 100/100

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Aww, haha, thank you (: