such a sweet and wonderfully constructed write, this is an improvement over previous writes...so much more real emotion and not as much unconnected feeling. i think you need to keep writing and hone your skills, because there is a flame of talent burning within you which should not be denied. well done, Amandaaa!!!
Love always hurt it's true bcoz, love;s a truth and truth always hurt!
Your this awesome Heartbreak write breaks my heart too, i felt bad about you if you really got heart break or break up with someone... well, you've too think tht you're the not one on this world who got hurt everyday .. in everyminu. too many folks get some hurt but depends on ;em hhow they stand up after fall in love on the ground and in the life....
awesome write, you've made from brroken heart..1010/100.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Rahul! (: I'm really glad that you liked it, and yes, this write is kind of just m.. read moreThank you so much Rahul! (: I'm really glad that you liked it, and yes, this write is kind of just my raw emotions thrown into a poem.
I know this feeling a little to well, it hurts knowing you fell for someone who does not feel the same or hurts you cause they want revenge.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
It REALLY does. However, I am better now. I'm sorry for the delayed reply.. I just now got back on t.. read moreIt REALLY does. However, I am better now. I'm sorry for the delayed reply.. I just now got back on the site. Thanks!
A sweet, poetic construction you have here. Your talent always escapes in the most brilliant ways with your poems. Thank you for sharing another heartfelt piece!
this is the part after the relationship where you begin to realize that you're not the problem... i love the strength this write shows. this had a very powerful feel to it:) thank you for sharing yours truely Danielle
Aww, again very sweet and emotive. I can feel the sadness because it is so raw - i can imagine you feeling this way when your writing it, with tears and tissues everywhere, it's what happens to me when I write painful pieces. You're so talented!
Love to you x
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11 Years Ago
Thank you, Icelanna, that's very sweet of you (: but haha, yes, I was crying when I wrote all of the.. read moreThank you, Icelanna, that's very sweet of you (: but haha, yes, I was crying when I wrote all of these recent poems, I just don't bother to wipe the tears from my eyes anymore, it wastes too many tissues, haha.
Amanda: if he hurts you, know he is not worth your time. Find that boy who treats you like a queen, who loves you regardless, who has seen you at your worst and didn't run away but instead helped you through the hard times. He's out there, just keep looking. Great piece :)
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11 Years Ago
Aww, haha, thank you. This particular one was actually about past relationships, but I've just been .. read moreAww, haha, thank you. This particular one was actually about past relationships, but I've just been in a depressing mood lately. Haha, but anyways, thanks again (:
11 Years Ago
My pleasure, remember never settle. Been there lets just say id rather stay single than go back
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