I Don't Know

Sorry guys, I'm a big mess at the moment.

I don't know anything anymore,
I feel like I don't even know you,
We were so close, so in sync,
But, was any of it true?

Everyone has given up on me,
No one cares anymore,
You said you wouldn't give up,
You promised... You swore.

I don't know what happened,
I'm me, same as I've always been,
Everything else has changed, though,
More than I can comprehend.

I guess people just change,
I guess they just grow apart,
I guess they change their minds,
Or have a change of heart.

Feeling so useless and pointless,
I just... Don't really know.
Can we go back to how we were?
Or should I just go ahead and go?

Reviews

[quinfinn]

and how old are you, my sweet? i have two words to describe this malady you speak of......RAGING HORMONES.....love, true love, is very rare at your age. i know you feel it, but trust me, chemicals in your brain are racing to beat the clock. this a good write and i understand your pain and confusion. be kinder to yourself and take your time.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

13, hahaha. And thank you. I'm sorry, I'm kind of just a big mess right now, I had to let it out somehow.

[quinfinn]

it's gonna be fine girl. you have many more years to experience love. all young boys understand is how their hormones affect that second "brain" of theirs. give yourself a chance to grow some and figure out who you are. you already know part of that...poet!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Aww, haha, thank you (: I'll work on it.

[quinfinn]

awesome!

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww. Hug. I know how you feel but I will be sending a little extra love your way. Us at WC definitely have a lot of love for you.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Aww, thank you Ahmad, that means a lot to me.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Nicely written. It would be good if you work a little on the rhyme scheme. :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thanks.

[Amanda]

I really like this because its so relatable. My favorite part was:
"Feeling so useless and pointless,
I just... Don't really know.
Can we go back to how we were?
Or should I just go ahead and go?"
Very nice job

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you.