A wonderfully written poem, Amanda! I truly enjoyed reading this poem! Your work always impresses me and a lot of other writers on this website. You never let me down with your such beautiful work. It's true that the holidays should be about spending time with one another and not all of the gifts. Also, celebrating the birth of Jesus. I think some people tend to overlook the main reason of Christmas for their own selfish reasons. If they don't celebrate him all of the time, then they should atleast of December the 25th of every single year that we have left in this messed up world. He's done so much for us. He died for our sins! That's the sweetest and best thing a person could ever do for someone else I must say. Excellent job, Amanda once again! :)
"Some are not as fortunate,
Be grateful for what you have,
Some have no family or loved ones,
TO make them smile or laugh." --You're speaking the truth! I think it's sad when some people in this world go without happiness since they have no one to share that with.
Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Ashley! (: your reviews of my poems are always so sweet! And yes, many people are.. read moreThank you so much, Ashley! (: your reviews of my poems are always so sweet! And yes, many people are beginning to forget the true meaning of these holidays, no matter the holiday that they celebrate.. None of these holidays are about being selfish! They're about being thankful for what you have, appreciating your loved ones.. Not about whatever gifts you get. Like Christmas for example is about the birth of Jesus, but if you went and asked a whole bunch of random people what they thought of when they thought of Christmas.. Well that wouldn't be their answer, and it's terrible! But thanks again Ashley (:
You're very welcome! (: I love reading your poems. They're completely awesome and amazing! Yes I tot.. read moreYou're very welcome! (: I love reading your poems. They're completely awesome and amazing! Yes I totally agree with you on that subject of matter too. I know there are some decent people out in the world that do know the true meaning of Christmas. Haha! You're welcome once again! (:
11 Years Ago
Hahahaha, I'm glad, I enjoy your poetry as well(: and yes, I know, but the sad thing is that the gre.. read moreHahahaha, I'm glad, I enjoy your poetry as well(: and yes, I know, but the sad thing is that the greedy and selfish ones far outnumber the decent people :/
11 Years Ago
Haha awwh thank you(: and yeah you're absolutely right sadly but true.
What a brilliant, bright, lifting write! You share so tenderly about the beauty of the season... the depth of family and friends... true joy and peace so many hunger for... finding all those wonderful things to be thankful for... and you extend the best of wishes to all around the globe.. Thank you sharing your heart with us... it must be as big as the world!
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11 Years Ago
Hahahahaa, you're welcome Craig (: and thanks so much!
This is a beautiful poem for this wonderful Christmas season! I love the resonance of the winter season's spirit in your words :)
Happy holidays to you too,
-Penelope H.
You write so well. I enjoy the fact that you can so easily write a beautifully flowing rhyme scheme in your writings. I am impressed by that. It makes reading your work so enjoyable for me.
This was a piece worth reading, especially with the upcoming holiday and festivities. I hope you have a wonderful holiday yourself... enjoy it, especially the time with friends and family, which is what I enjoy about this time of year.
Thank you so much, that's sweet of you to say (: I'm also glad that my work is enjoyable to read, it.. read moreThank you so much, that's sweet of you to say (: I'm also glad that my work is enjoyable to read, it's quite a compliment, to me. And yes, I also enjoy spending time with loved ones, which I believe is what you're really supposed to do, instead of worrying about presents and being greedy. Thanks again! (:
11 Years Ago
Yes, presents are just a positive plus to this time of year. We all need to remember and celebrate t.. read moreYes, presents are just a positive plus to this time of year. We all need to remember and celebrate the real reason for this holiday and enjoy it with our close family and friends.
Beautiful! I love the holiday season, and fully agree with this poem and all of what Ashley has to say. I especially love te second to last stanza, because it's so very important for people to realize that they shouldn't take these things for granted! And the ending is very strong. Best wishes to you as well this holiday season :)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Cindy! Yes, many people do need to realize the true meaning of the holiday season,.. read moreThank you so much Cindy! Yes, many people do need to realize the true meaning of the holiday season, it's not all about money and presents and being greedy. Thanks again (:
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