Happy Holidays!

Happy Holidays!

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:

Wishing for peace,
For everlasting joy,
Happiness and love,
For every girl and boy.

A time to be with family,
To feel the love in the air,
Not a time for tears,
Unhappiness or despair.

The holiday season,
Full of love, joy, and hope...
To be grateful for what you have,
Not to sit around and mope.

Colored lights and decorations,
Candles or Christmas trees,
Whatever it is you wish to do,
Just enjoy it, please.

Some are not as fortunate,
Be grateful for what you have,
Some have no family or loved ones,
To make them smile or laugh.

Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa,
No matter the celebrated holiday,
I wish you the best with it,
While celebrating it your own way...

© 2012 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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A wonderfully written poem, Amanda! I truly enjoyed reading this poem! Your work always impresses me and a lot of other writers on this website. You never let me down with your such beautiful work. It's true that the holidays should be about spending time with one another and not all of the gifts. Also, celebrating the birth of Jesus. I think some people tend to overlook the main reason of Christmas for their own selfish reasons. If they don't celebrate him all of the time, then they should atleast of December the 25th of every single year that we have left in this messed up world. He's done so much for us. He died for our sins! That's the sweetest and best thing a person could ever do for someone else I must say. Excellent job, Amanda once again! :)

"Some are not as fortunate,
Be grateful for what you have,
Some have no family or loved ones,
TO make them smile or laugh." --You're speaking the truth! I think it's sad when some people in this world go without happiness since they have no one to share that with.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome! (: I love reading your poems. They're completely awesome and amazing! Yes I tot.. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Hahahaha, I'm glad, I enjoy your poetry as well(: and yes, I know, but the sad thing is that the gre.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

11 Years Ago

Haha awwh thank you(: and yeah you're absolutely right sadly but true.



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This is really good! It get's me into the spirit!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Hahahaha, thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it (:
Cute poem :)
A perfect poem for the holidays! :)
I was really impressed with this poem. Good job


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Carson(:
What a brilliant, bright, lifting write! You share so tenderly about the beauty of the season... the depth of family and friends... true joy and peace so many hunger for... finding all those wonderful things to be thankful for... and you extend the best of wishes to all around the globe.. Thank you sharing your heart with us... it must be as big as the world!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Hahahahaa, you're welcome Craig (: and thanks so much!
This is a beautiful poem for this wonderful Christmas season! I love the resonance of the winter season's spirit in your words :)
Happy holidays to you too,
-Penelope H.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Penelope (:
Thank you, wishing you a happy holidays as well!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you! (:
You write so well. I enjoy the fact that you can so easily write a beautifully flowing rhyme scheme in your writings. I am impressed by that. It makes reading your work so enjoyable for me.
This was a piece worth reading, especially with the upcoming holiday and festivities. I hope you have a wonderful holiday yourself... enjoy it, especially the time with friends and family, which is what I enjoy about this time of year.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, that's sweet of you to say (: I'm also glad that my work is enjoyable to read, it.. read more
CreativeStroke

11 Years Ago

Yes, presents are just a positive plus to this time of year. We all need to remember and celebrate t.. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Very true (:
Beautiful! I love the holiday season, and fully agree with this poem and all of what Ashley has to say. I especially love te second to last stanza, because it's so very important for people to realize that they shouldn't take these things for granted! And the ending is very strong. Best wishes to you as well this holiday season :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Cindy! Yes, many people do need to realize the true meaning of the holiday season,.. read more
CindyLu

11 Years Ago

You're Welcome :)
A wonderful poem! Have a Merry Christmas and keep writing great poens like this!! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I wish a merry Christmas to you as well(:
The only thing I suggest is instead of having an ellipsis at the end of your poem, have an exclamation point. Other than that, very well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I'll definitely consider it (:
Falling Leaf.

11 Years Ago

I just think it makes your wishes sound even more sincere :)
Compliments of the Season Amanda :3 This was really cute and in the spirit of the holiday. Great job as always you never disappoint.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you Keegan, that means a lot (:

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