A wonderfully written poem, Amanda! I truly enjoyed reading this poem! Your work always impresses me and a lot of other writers on this website. You never let me down with your such beautiful work. It's true that the holidays should be about spending time with one another and not all of the gifts. Also, celebrating the birth of Jesus. I think some people tend to overlook the main reason of Christmas for their own selfish reasons. If they don't celebrate him all of the time, then they should atleast of December the 25th of every single year that we have left in this messed up world. He's done so much for us. He died for our sins! That's the sweetest and best thing a person could ever do for someone else I must say. Excellent job, Amanda once again! :)
"Some are not as fortunate,
Be grateful for what you have,
Some have no family or loved ones,
TO make them smile or laugh." --You're speaking the truth! I think it's sad when some people in this world go without happiness since they have no one to share that with.
Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Ashley! (: your reviews of my poems are always so sweet! And yes, many people are.. read moreThank you so much, Ashley! (: your reviews of my poems are always so sweet! And yes, many people are beginning to forget the true meaning of these holidays, no matter the holiday that they celebrate.. None of these holidays are about being selfish! They're about being thankful for what you have, appreciating your loved ones.. Not about whatever gifts you get. Like Christmas for example is about the birth of Jesus, but if you went and asked a whole bunch of random people what they thought of when they thought of Christmas.. Well that wouldn't be their answer, and it's terrible! But thanks again Ashley (:
You're very welcome! (: I love reading your poems. They're completely awesome and amazing! Yes I tot.. read moreYou're very welcome! (: I love reading your poems. They're completely awesome and amazing! Yes I totally agree with you on that subject of matter too. I know there are some decent people out in the world that do know the true meaning of Christmas. Haha! You're welcome once again! (:
11 Years Ago
Hahahaha, I'm glad, I enjoy your poetry as well(: and yes, I know, but the sad thing is that the gre.. read moreHahahaha, I'm glad, I enjoy your poetry as well(: and yes, I know, but the sad thing is that the greedy and selfish ones far outnumber the decent people :/
11 Years Ago
Haha awwh thank you(: and yeah you're absolutely right sadly but true.
Wonderful write i read after a months.... awesome write, i was missing your writes :)
and this write made my write... i enjoyed reading this piece, i want to read some more your poems :)
100/100.
I love how you point out the importance of the holidays. Very nicely done. Enjoyed this a lot, very sweet and nice. The holidays are such a lovely thing, and the meaning behind them.
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11 Years Ago
Yes, they certainly are! I apologize for such a delayed reply; I only just got back onto the account.. read moreYes, they certainly are! I apologize for such a delayed reply; I only just got back onto the account. Thank you so much! (:
The holidays are the best. You get to be with family and focus on something other than yourself something greater. I love Christmas it is my favorite! I hope you have a great holiday which ever one you are celebrating. Great write!
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11 Years Ago
Yes. That is soooo true! And I celebrate Christmas, yes it has been an amazing day (: and thanks for.. read moreYes. That is soooo true! And I celebrate Christmas, yes it has been an amazing day (: and thanks for the review!
I really like the composition of this poem. Your rhymes are very good. You don't force them. They are very natural and they contribute to the flow of the poem.
Overall, I think this poem is a great description of the Christmas season. You describe all of the wonderful decorations and the sense of remembering and giving to other too.
Your last stanza really impressed me. You embrace those who celebrate other holidays and wish them well. I think that is a great gesture of peace, light, and understanding.
I am glad I read this poem! Merry Christmas to you!
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, I'm extremely glad that you enjoyed this (: merry Christmas to you as well!
Haha I needed a poem like that to make me feel the Christmas spirit. Christmas seemed to have come so fast this year I didn't even see it coming.
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11 Years Ago
Hahahah, I felt the exact same way! I was like whoa, is Christmas seriously this coming Tuesday? It'.. read moreHahahah, I felt the exact same way! I was like whoa, is Christmas seriously this coming Tuesday? It's crazy! and thanks for the read and review, I'm glad you enjoyed it (:
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