Happy Holidays!

Happy Holidays!

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:

Wishing for peace,
For everlasting joy,
Happiness and love,
For every girl and boy.

A time to be with family,
To feel the love in the air,
Not a time for tears,
Unhappiness or despair.

The holiday season,
Full of love, joy, and hope...
To be grateful for what you have,
Not to sit around and mope.

Colored lights and decorations,
Candles or Christmas trees,
Whatever it is you wish to do,
Just enjoy it, please.

Some are not as fortunate,
Be grateful for what you have,
Some have no family or loved ones,
To make them smile or laugh.

Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa,
No matter the celebrated holiday,
I wish you the best with it,
While celebrating it your own way...

© 2012 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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A wonderfully written poem, Amanda! I truly enjoyed reading this poem! Your work always impresses me and a lot of other writers on this website. You never let me down with your such beautiful work. It's true that the holidays should be about spending time with one another and not all of the gifts. Also, celebrating the birth of Jesus. I think some people tend to overlook the main reason of Christmas for their own selfish reasons. If they don't celebrate him all of the time, then they should atleast of December the 25th of every single year that we have left in this messed up world. He's done so much for us. He died for our sins! That's the sweetest and best thing a person could ever do for someone else I must say. Excellent job, Amanda once again! :)

"Some are not as fortunate,
Be grateful for what you have,
Some have no family or loved ones,
TO make them smile or laugh." --You're speaking the truth! I think it's sad when some people in this world go without happiness since they have no one to share that with.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome! (: I love reading your poems. They're completely awesome and amazing! Yes I tot.. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Hahahaha, I'm glad, I enjoy your poetry as well(: and yes, I know, but the sad thing is that the gre.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

11 Years Ago

Haha awwh thank you(: and yeah you're absolutely right sadly but true.



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Wonderful write i read after a months.... awesome write, i was missing your writes :)
and this write made my write... i enjoyed reading this piece, i want to read some more your poems :)
100/100.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Awwwww, thank you so so much! (:
Rahul

11 Years Ago

It's been always my pleasure to read your stuffs and give reviews... :)
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Oh okay! Well I'm so glad that you enjoy it! (:
I love how you point out the importance of the holidays. Very nicely done. Enjoyed this a lot, very sweet and nice. The holidays are such a lovely thing, and the meaning behind them.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Yes, they certainly are! I apologize for such a delayed reply; I only just got back onto the account.. read more
great poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you (:
beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

heyy your back XD
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

That I am! (:

Colored lights and decorations,
Candles or Christmas trees,
Whatever it is you wish to do,
Just enjoy it, please.
.....

loved this above stanza indeed. Powerful words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Acer.
Acer

11 Years Ago

My pleasure, Amaandaaa :), liked you work too.
Very true and wonderful message for the holidays.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much (:
The holidays are the best. You get to be with family and focus on something other than yourself something greater. I love Christmas it is my favorite! I hope you have a great holiday which ever one you are celebrating. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Yes. That is soooo true! And I celebrate Christmas, yes it has been an amazing day (: and thanks for.. read more
Oh, I just love this!! You have written of the wonderful love, joy and hope of the season -the true meaning of it!!
This is a very nice poem!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much (:
I really like the composition of this poem. Your rhymes are very good. You don't force them. They are very natural and they contribute to the flow of the poem.

Overall, I think this poem is a great description of the Christmas season. You describe all of the wonderful decorations and the sense of remembering and giving to other too.

Your last stanza really impressed me. You embrace those who celebrate other holidays and wish them well. I think that is a great gesture of peace, light, and understanding.

I am glad I read this poem! Merry Christmas to you!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm extremely glad that you enjoyed this (: merry Christmas to you as well!
Haha I needed a poem like that to make me feel the Christmas spirit. Christmas seemed to have come so fast this year I didn't even see it coming.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Hahahah, I felt the exact same way! I was like whoa, is Christmas seriously this coming Tuesday? It'.. read more
GlacialStars

11 Years Ago

Of course! :)
Nice! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thanks!

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