How Do I Know?

How Do I Know?

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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So, I'm not usually this sad about everything.. It's just not a very good night, and I needed to let out some feelings.. Now that I've written it, I feel a lot better. But please, no hate.

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How do I know that one day,
The temporary gone
Won't be forever?

How do I know that one day,
My mistakes won't ruin
Our chances of being together?

How do I know that one day,
I won't hurt him so much
That he can't forgive me?

How do I know that one day,
He won't reconsider us
And choose to be free?

Thoughts spinning,
All around my head,
Wishing I could redo it,
Or wishing I was dead.

Then I couldn't hurt him,
Or make him upset again,
I couldn't mess things up,
Would he be happier then?

I just want what's best for him,
Even if it really hurts me,
I just want a happy life for him,
Even if it isn't me he needs.

Says that I make him happy,
That I'm the best thing in life,
Says he'll love me forever,
That he wants me to be his wife...

I hope that that is the truth,
And we get over these fights,
I hope that he'll always love me...
And I can stop crying at night.

© 2012 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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This is so different than the "Without Him" poem!! What has happened in the last two weeks to cause this, Amanda? It sounds like he is saying what he THINKS you want to hear by saying words that usually coincide with "I Love You" and "you ARE my heart!" ......He's just saying it in the "younger" version by NOT knowing what to say to you. Do something that connects to WHY you are both together. If you find a sport or even something that you both get to compete at without the distraction of others, that might build character and allow feelings under the surface start to emerge!! No pros and cons list or shopping together, thinking that is "me" time!! lol It's not. Let him tell you what is in his head by wearing him down first with something that takes his mind off of what is puzzling him, and have that turn into YOU building him back up again..... a form of trust and showing your heart in a different light. xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Yes, I know, I've kinda been on a roller coaster of emotions lately :/ I know that he really means w.. read more
Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

Seriously, that is awesome news Amanda!! Very col!! xoxo -Mark
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Yes, I'm pretty happy myself(: thanks again Mark!



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Great rhyming and a sad, sad but lovely poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you! (:
great write love the concept, i can't help but think that guys who make you cry at night just aren't worth it and they tend to be the abusive kind

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marie

11 Years Ago

wel why don't you try talking to him about it apologizing, making up for it try doing something good.. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

I apologized this morning, and he seems to have forgiven me. It's kinda funny how you said I should .. read more
marie

11 Years Ago

see a simple apology and good deed usualy helps in these things :) hope things are smooth sailing fr.. read more
its a beautiful poem. a sad concept but a beautiful beautiful poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Awwww, thank you so much.
A beautiful poem. I know the sadness from another in my family. I wish love would never hurt anyone but if it didn't then love would almost be meaningless for love has its ups and downs. That's what makes love so wonderful. I hope your love will prosper and grow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you. And yes, I believe that if there was never any hurt, sadness, or problems with love, then.. read more
Lino Rie

11 Years Ago

Any time.^-^
This is so different than the "Without Him" poem!! What has happened in the last two weeks to cause this, Amanda? It sounds like he is saying what he THINKS you want to hear by saying words that usually coincide with "I Love You" and "you ARE my heart!" ......He's just saying it in the "younger" version by NOT knowing what to say to you. Do something that connects to WHY you are both together. If you find a sport or even something that you both get to compete at without the distraction of others, that might build character and allow feelings under the surface start to emerge!! No pros and cons list or shopping together, thinking that is "me" time!! lol It's not. Let him tell you what is in his head by wearing him down first with something that takes his mind off of what is puzzling him, and have that turn into YOU building him back up again..... a form of trust and showing your heart in a different light. xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Yes, I know, I've kinda been on a roller coaster of emotions lately :/ I know that he really means w.. read more
Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

Seriously, that is awesome news Amanda!! Very col!! xoxo -Mark
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Yes, I'm pretty happy myself(: thanks again Mark!
Another beautiful write, Full of sorrow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Jordan's Back

11 Years Ago

Always :)

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