My Light In The Darkness

My Light In The Darkness

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:

I have no makeup on,
My hair is a mess,
But he already loves me,
So I don't need to impress.

He thinks I'm beautiful,
Perfect in every way,
He doesn't see my flaws,
Though I show them every day...

I'm loved by him,
Always and forever,
He says its really true,
That he'll leave never.

Calls me an angel,
A goddess, his queen,
And I'm always forgiven,
No matter how mean.

He's always tolerant,
The perfect match for me,
I can be myself with him,
He can be himself with me.

Compliments, love,
Arguments, fights,
But through the darkness,
He'll always be my light..

Like fish need water,
Like people need air,
Forever and always,
I need him to be there.

© 2012 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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7 stanzas, 7 stanzas, lol I think HE proves to be the lucky one. His girl is above her own emotions that still have to try and perfect what she ALSO fears and lives for, and all the while........... he is dedicated to Amanda, and does not play the role of a shy dotard. He loves, you respond, and WE get to experience that smallest little insight into what we receive in poem form. Wonderful job!! Beautiful Amanda. xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

I think as long as we are coming to you as true fans, that we have an obligation to nurture what we .. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Hahahahahahah, I know what you mean by the shortening comments thing, but I like your long comments,.. read more
Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

That very comment of yours is why ANYONE would WANT to follow you. A most strange world we live in t.. read more



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nice poem.......95/1oo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thanks.
This is great and so touching.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much (:
Wow, what a beautiful poem about finding the right one. And that is a hard mission, you took the words out of my mouth about how I feel about the man I'm in love with right now. Thanks for writing. =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you could relate (:
I wish I had a lover who could see past my flaws . This is an amazing piece . Wonderful job Amanda

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon

11 Years Ago

You are welcome and really I have found someone like that . Sadly , it has taken till about a couple.. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Oh I gotcha. Well, at least now you've realized it (:
Moon

11 Years Ago

yep !
7 stanzas, 7 stanzas, lol I think HE proves to be the lucky one. His girl is above her own emotions that still have to try and perfect what she ALSO fears and lives for, and all the while........... he is dedicated to Amanda, and does not play the role of a shy dotard. He loves, you respond, and WE get to experience that smallest little insight into what we receive in poem form. Wonderful job!! Beautiful Amanda. xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

I think as long as we are coming to you as true fans, that we have an obligation to nurture what we .. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Hahahahahahah, I know what you mean by the shortening comments thing, but I like your long comments,.. read more
Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

That very comment of yours is why ANYONE would WANT to follow you. A most strange world we live in t.. read more
This is such a powerful loveable piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much (:
oh what a sweet poem :) i'm glad you have someone like that :) you deserve him your really nice :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Awwwww, thank you! (:
beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

your very welcome
This is such a powerful loveable piece, It flows with the passion and innocent emotion you have for this person and you have captured your want and desire for him perfectly!

Like fish need water,
Like people need air,
Forever and always,
I need him to be there.

Perfectly Rendered!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Awwwww, thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it (:
Sweet and beautifully expressed! well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much! (:
This is so beautifully written! Every line I read I thought about my fiance and how the relationship between us is. We love each other despite the flaws, mistakes and fights. Thank you for sharing this! It was very well done :)

~Erinne



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

11 Years Ago

Awww, thank you, I'm glad that you could relate and that you enjoyed it(:

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Amandaaa Caroline (:

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