Her Smile (:

I wrote this for a friend about his little girl, he asked me to write about her smile.

Her precious little smile,
It's enough to make your day,
It makes you feel all warm inside,
In every single way.

Makes you smile on a bad day,
It's enough to light up a room,
It'll erase all of your worries,
Make you forget all your gloom.

It'll make you forget all the bad,
Focus on the good in the world,
All of this can happen to you,
Just by looking at your little girl...

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I Love it. It has, to me, this beautiful galloping crescendo that hides a poem within a lesson within another poem. That "other" poem is the beauty that wrote something very unique that plays with all our heart strings. It's short, simple, and very very affecting!! Beautiful Amanda.... xoxo -Mark

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, thank you so much Mark, that means a lot (:

[unknown]

Simply beautiful. Always making a smile on my face, Manda. :)

[An owl on the moon]

It really is the simple things in the world that can melt away the darkness... light the world with such a brilliant, beautiful radiance... You capture that so well with this wondrous dedication! May we all learn how a smile can transform any day... :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, thank you Craig, I'm glad you enjoyed it(:

[Jordan's Back]

This is the Sweetest poem I have ever seen, Im Sure her and her daddy love it :) Excellent Job!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you(: