Life Wouldn't Be Worth It

Life wouldn't be worth it,

If I didn't have him,

My life wouldn't be happy,

It would be dark and dim.

 

He's my true other half,

My all and my everything,

He gives me all his love,

And happiness is all he brings.

 

I'd die before I'd let him go,

He's the light in my life,

Life won't be worth it,

If I'm not one day his wife.

 

Happy and in love,

Is all I'll ever be,

As long as I'm with him,

And he stays with me.

 

I'd risk my life for him,

He means the world to me,

I want to be with him forever,

He's my eternity.

Reviews

[MandaBear]

very sweet I liked it :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwwww, thank you(:

[MandaBear]

your welcome

[captain]

very romantic and sweet. I like it!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you! (:

[unknown]

LOVE IT! AS ALWAYS! You are good at this genre. :) Keep it up, Mavorenen. :) You'll be nation wide one day. :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwwww, thank you(: I'm sure you will be too!

[unknown]

:) Keep it up. :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I'll do my best to(:

[Erinne S.]

Beautiful flow in this piece... definitely can see the spark of love that inspired this piece :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwwww, thank you! (:

[An owl on the moon]

Your poetry really does sing of the sweetest love... that beautiful place of life our hearts are made for... where we really can feel complete and fulfilled. Truly am so thrilled for you two! :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, thank you so much, it means a lot(:

[An owl on the moon]

May you be so inspired... every day forever... :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, I hope so too, then I can keep getting your sweet reviews on my poems (:

[Jordan's Back]

This is another sweet romantic piece that warms the heart, I think Romance is your genre :) Keep it up

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thanks(: