He's Like a Dream..

The words he speaks about me,
Bring a heavy blush to my cheeks,
Even his sweet, comforting voice,
Can leave me speechless for weeks.

Feels like a complete dream,
That love like this could be true,
Ever since day one with him,
I've hoped I wouldn't lose him too...

So far we've survived and grown,
I swear he's a gift from above,
Hopefully we continue like this,
Growing closer and more in love.

It's very completely obvious,
He's the greatest thing in my life,
Hopefully one day we'll marry,
And become happy husband and wife.

I've fallen head over heels,
Hopefully it wasn't a mistake,
Don't know how much heartbreak,
I'll be able to continue to take...

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

Aw, this is sweet. :) 13, eh? I remember when I was thirteen... 4 months ago... lol :) But anyway, I know exactly how this feels, to love someone this much, and to see your future with him and really know you love him... It's even more special when you're younger. "He's the greatest thing in my life" definitely speaks to me dude. I know what that feels like... (: The bit at the end, though... That hints at sadness deep in your heart... Like, all the happy loving words are on top, but there is sadness under it all. The best poems are expressive in this way. Cause they come straight from the heart, like this one, right? Anyway, good job. :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahahahah, thank you(: I also believe that the best poems come straight from the heart.

[Admiral Kirk]

No problem!!! :D Haha, they sure do... (:

[MyLifeAndAllThat]

I've only just joined this site, so this is the first poem that i have read. I've got to say that it really appealed to me. I love, love poem's, and how they are so emotional. It's a really meaningful poem, and i love it! I find it hard to believe that you're only 13, truely.
Hopefully, you will read and review some of mine, when i write them. Because, like you, i am also shy about showing my work off to people. Scared of what they're going to say.
Anyway, back to you. I really enjoyed reading this.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I'm glad you enjoyed it(: &yes, I've been writing for like only a week and I'm still very shy, so I can totally relate to you! I'll be sure to review some of yours(: just so you know, on this site, you don't really have anything to worry about, everyone is totally nonjudgmental so you should be fine(: thanks for the read and review!

[An owl on the moon]

Just a breathlessly beautiful write, filled with the music of love and life... And the best part? You've a dream come true to light the world with! May this joy fill you every day... and yes, truly grow and grow always... :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, thanks so much(: I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to read &review(:

[Jordan's Back]

This is the most beautiful love poem I have ever seen! Its Passionate, and Majestic! You can feel almost the hymn-like praise that is pouring from your heart into the The readers mind. This guy is Definitely the lucky one

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, hahaha, thanks.