Kiss (A Cinquain)

Kiss (A Cinquain)

A Poem by amanda_joy

 

 

 



Your kiss
The dark shadow
between your open lips
or the mouth surrounding it gives
pleasure

© 2008 amanda_joy


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Wow. Simple, powerful, visual, sensual, seductive...
Excellent job!

Posted 16 Years Ago
this is something I've never tried, but seeing how well you have done it here makes me want to try.

very descriptive and sensual and I can see where it could easily turn into the 6 word poem.

well done.

jen-JG

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Fremantle, Australia



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