We need hope

Thoughts that crossed my mind today because of plans me and my friends have for our future.

No life
No pain
Was worse
You had it bad
I had it bad
But we try
We want to help
But we are too young
Not even 18
Too poor
Yet we dream
Of better days
Where we're free
Where we're happy
I can only hope
One day
Our dreams
Become reality
Because we need hope
To keep us going

Reviews

[Heartful5160]

Very good. I wish for the same as well. That's a really good poem, for what's going on for right now in the world. Keep writing!

[DoormanDan]

This is a lovely nice little piece of writing you've written here! It shows that you have tons of talent as far as writing's concerned. It's nice to know that I'm not the only song writer on this website! Brilliant writing, there's no other way to describe this! :)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

This is really nice piece. The short broken lines really added and sense of wonder and awe to the pot. This poem is also very true. Everyone need at least just a sparkle of hope to keep going on this tedious journey called life. Hope is the moooooooooooooooooooooooooooost powerfulthing in the world. You fdid a great job a capturing this effect. Keep up the good work and I hope you find your hope.