Stay with me

Stay with me

A Poem by song writer
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Wrote this while listening to a song. It's a love song one of the only types of songs I can write.

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I just want you
Why can't you love me?
Why do have to run away?
Do you hate me?
Am I alone in feeling like I'm falling in love?
Don't you get it
Don't you see it when I look into your eyes
Why can't you stay?
Why do you have to run away?
I need you
I want you
Don't you see
Don't you sense that we were meant to be?
So don't run away
Stay with me
So that you see what I see
So that you feel what I feel
Because without you I'm weak
Without you I'm not me
Without you I wouldn't be the person I am now
So don't run away
Don't hide
When I say I love you because I really do


© 2014 song writer


Author's Note

song writer
This is not about anyone in particular I just made it because I got inspired by a song.

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well you play the part well, great write maybe you could teach me how to write a song

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the way you took a non-traditional style of writing and made it deeply convey a sense of palpable emotion. The poem read more like a rant of sorts as opposed to a song like you said it was meant to be. If you do intend to make this a song, I would recommend rereading it a couple times to find a common verse, and set specific verses by leaving a space beneath it. If this is intended to be a poem then I think it's perfect the way it is. Either way this is very well written. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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