Lonely girl

Lonely girl

A Poem by song writer
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This is an old poem that my mom found it's mine and it's written about how the world is and me wanting to become a writer but the world telling me no.

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I can't stop the feelings
I can't stop the pain
Because that's all I have
That's all I am right now
A lonely girl living in a lonely world
I hate to think
This is my life
I hate to feel
Like I can't be
Who I am
Because God knows what's going to happen
God knows who I am
But in this world
I'm a lonely girl
Trying to be me
But I can't in a world that's practical
That doesn't understand
That talent is beautiful

© 2014 song writer


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a great poem, the desperateness, wanting the world to understand what it can't understand anymore because all it has left are the ruins left by human nature. Wanting people to understand something hat you only feel you alone knows, the feeling of loneliness. Great poem, love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


song writer

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Maybe it's your pen name, but I see this sung as a short song :D It also helps me imagine a colorful, passionate girl in a black and white world. Is the "God knows what's going to happen" foreshadowing something? Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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