Falling

Having a hard time getting over a crush decided to write about it.

I'v fallen 

Oh I'v fallen too deep

I can't get up 

I can't even breath

Why do you make me feel this way?

I just can't stop falling

Why does love feel this way?

Why can't I just see

It can't be 

I need to stop

But I can't seem to let it go

Why can't I move on?

Just let it go

Be free from the pain

Of knowing it can't be

But I'm still falling

I just can't stop 

Falling

Reviews

[Lisa Bland]

Brillant poem i can really relate to the words.

[song writer]

Thank you for liking it.

[ZackSnow9]

Hi everybody, I'm Zack. I'm new to this and I am trying to figure all of this out as fast as I can. But nice poem. Do I have to try out to join this group?

[song writer]

lolz this isn't a group this is where people like you review peoples writing.

[ZackSnow9]

OK. Thank you

[L.L. Lily]

I love this piece, I can totally relate, Falling in love can have it's bittersweet feeling but worth it. Thanks for sharing it. :)

[song writer]

Thank you.

[L.L. Lily]

No problem, and don't stop writing! :)

[ZackSnow9]

LOL alright. Same to you.