You Can't Run From Yourself

You Can't Run From Yourself

A Poem by song writer
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Small song/poem whatever you want to call it. I hope you like it.

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You run from the fate you left to me
 You run from the one you love 
But you can't run from yourself
 Like you thought you could
You can't hide cause I will find you 
Even when you leave me behind
I  found you finally
Today is the day you get what you deserve from me 
You get all the pain and suffering you left for me 
Running is not an option no 
You can't run no more
Cause I found you hiding in plain sight 
Today was the day I gave you all my pain and suffering 
Now you can't  run no more 

© 2013 song writer


Author's Note

song writer
Sorry this is probable the only thing you are going to see from me for awhile. I don't have much time to write due to the fact that i have school, but I will try to add more stuff soon.

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wow. I take back my comment on your other poem, this one is definitely my favorite!!! It's very captivating!

Posted 11 Years Ago


We can run but can't hide for we will be discovered somehow...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem full of emotion.

Powerful line:

"Cause I found you hiding in plain sight" *wow what an image. powerful.

I'd almost say, "I found you, hiding in plain sight." *just a suggestion. It's beautiful just as is.

I can relate to this poem.

Happy writing,
Jennifer

Posted 11 Years Ago


song writer

11 Years Ago

I like it the way it is too, I think it works with the rest of the poem. Thank you for liking this a.. read more
JenniferMarie

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. I agree. It was the line that grabbed me so why change it? Great work.

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