the cycle

Building bridges
just to watch them fall.
Rebuild,forgive,forget
this vicious cycle again.
When is it time to end this.
To walk away, never look back.
Burn the memories,
Forget the past,
Take it back.
Never want to relive the past.
That was then
but this is now.
Time to move on,
without you around.

Author's Note

This is one of my earlier pieces. Also this is my first time posting my work for the world to see so if you could review nicely and not tear it into shreds I'd appreciate it.

Reviews

[Audrey Murray]

a very expressive poem I like the resolute way the words march through the poem..the readers has a good sense of closure at the end ..not left hanging irresolute well done

[Visharad Srivastava]

Small,simple to understand and very expressive....... Great work!!