Tomorrow never comes but years do

In the space
of yesterday
I found myself
travelling today
never reaching
tomorrow.

Reviews

[Inkspire]

Short and simple .
We never reach tomorrow. Tomorrow always has to wait.

[Christina J. Barker]

The author exhibits an outstanding mastery of language, skillfully merging narrative techniques with deep thematic exploration. The integration of symbolism and imagery not only enriches the story but also encourages readers to explore its underlying meanings. The pacing is finely tuned, creating a narrative that builds tension effectively, while the character development remains complex and convincing.

[andrew mitchell]

What can I say Christina, if only I could write as well as this professional review. I am flattered to say the least particularly when there are so many excellent writers on this site than I. Thank you very much.

[Christina J. Barker]

Hey there, fellow writer! If you’re looking to polish your work, refine your story, or just make sure everything reads smoothly, I’m here to help as your beta reader, proofreader, and editor. Let’s work together to make your writing shine!

[Christina J. Barker]

And if you have anything to work on either from your book or anything other else, I hope I am qualified to assist you with that sir.
Looking forward to having you more.

[Dorian]

A poem full of thoughts. Valuable and meaningful.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Dorian for your kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

Touche
Touche
Touche.........

[andrew mitchell]

Touché Sami touché!

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe.......

[Beren]

That's true. Seriously, wow!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Beren for your kind words.

[Thomas W Case]

True that. Great work. Powerful and poignant.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Thomas.

[Arundass TP]

Whether tomorrow exists? Whether yesterday exists? Nicely written poem.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Arundass

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Okay. I know you've heard this before but yesterday is gone and tomorrow never comes so the only thing we ever have is now. And NOW is a gift. That's why we call it the "present". I'm looking forward to eternity, myself, shedding this skin and bones facade and breaking free of these prison bars that are the ribs around my heart. I know nothing of eternity except the promise. I know nothing of the future except hope. But what I know of the NOW suggests to me that my faith and hope are not in vain or without purpose. A thought invoking write from you that I enjoyed, thank you for sharing it. F.

[andrew mitchell]

I have often wondered how we would be if we didn’t know the time. Yes we live in the now and the now
appears to be an extension of itself because we are always in the now ,never leaving but just changing. I need Stephen Hawkins to help me out on this one, he explains the concepts better.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Everything that can be, is or was. Everything reformed and made new is part of the was and part of the will be. That's what nature teaches me. The tree dies but it drops seeds and leaves and its body fertilizes the earth as food for what is to come, new life, born from the old. I'm a bit of a transcendentalist in that respect. I believe everything in the physical realm is a representation of a higher spiritual truth. I also believe our world is like a classroom with many lessons to learn. I'm studying hard.

[MCS]

Enjoyed this very much, you had me thinking about how I’ve used my time. The takeaway is a bit of a twist; that whatever we choose to do costs us the opportunity to do something else.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much MCS