The echo of yesterday
A Poem by
andrew mitchell
The goodbye
had no forwarding address
maybe I misread
the hello
hello,hello,hello.
© 2024 andrew mitchell
Reviews
Oh my always quite a pleasure to read what you are writing and thinking... Yes, sadly the goodbyes often do not leave a forwarding address.. (at the end of their lives)
Lisa
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
Goodbyes say it all, tossing the ball into the unknown, no goal.
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
Goodbyes say it all, tossing the ball into the unknown, no goal.
I like the idea of goodbyes have echoes; they reverberate many effects.
HNY my good mate.
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
I like the idea of goodbyes have echoes; they reverberate many effects.
HNY my good mate.
2 Weeks Ago
You too my friend.
2 Weeks Ago
Yes siiiirrrr. Gracie Mille
Oh hey! Now that packed quite a pinch and a punch there Andrew! 👍🏻👍🏻 Happy new year mate 🥳🎉
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
Oh hey! Now that packed quite a pinch and a punch there Andrew! 👍🏻👍🏻 Happy new year mate 🥳🎉
2 Weeks Ago
Happy New Year Red
When we call into the abyss of loss ... our words to echo sharply. Wonderful piece of brevity.
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
When we call into the abyss of loss ... our words to echo sharply. Wonderful piece of brevity.
2 Weeks Ago
Thank you Pryde. HNY
Most people are happy to tell good bye than hello. Nicely written
Posted 1 Month Ago
Most people are happy to tell good bye than hello. Nicely written
2 Weeks Ago
Thank you Arundass
If they whispered, you were probably off base.
Posted 1 Month Ago
If they whispered, you were probably off base.
2 Weeks Ago
Thanks John. HNY
I have gotten those before...unfortunately once from a dear friend...
by the time I found her again, she had passed away from ALS.....
but I keep saying hello to her hoping she may eventually answer.
j.
Posted 1 Month Ago
I have gotten those before...unfortunately once from a dear friend...
by the time I found her again, she had passed away from ALS.....
but I keep saying hello to her hoping she may eventually answer.
j.
2 Weeks Ago
Thanks J. HNY.
Andres,
At seventy-five, I feel like I am just a warehouse for all the good-byes I've not already delivered,livered, ivered, verddddd,
Vol
Posted 1 Month Ago
Andres,
At seventy-five, I feel like I am just a warehouse for all the good-byes I've not already delivered,livered, ivered, verddddd,
Vol
2 Weeks Ago
Thanks Vol. HNY
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Added on December 16, 2024
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andrew mitchell adelaide, Australia
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" When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,..
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