One moment please

With the lightness
of aluminium
and the boldness
of bronze.
He who has
a moment gold
will eventually
turn silver.

Reviews

[Abhilash Hegde]

quite interesting thoughts here. these few words say a lot. enjoyed reading it, thanks andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you

[Sami Khalil]

I love it; I think the Olympics are on the mind of the poet. You win gold in my book.

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Lisasview]

Hey there stranger!!
And only saying that because I have not been around for quite some time... Broken bones and now a new knee...so no desire to write until now.
I always enjoy your poems and I always find metaphors throughout. This one is clever...All about life...
Lisasview, still in Spain

[andrew mitchell]

Hi Lisa, so nice to hear from you and I hope your knee gives you a new lease on life. Thank you for your kind words and so pleased you visited my page.

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome... I actually posted a new poem...Waterfall Wishes...you might like it..
Lisa