In the stripping, the real you

Modesty was your coat
you wore that dropped
on entering the bedroom
where the bed became
your stage and rules
were made to be
followed then broken.
Act one, undoing your hair tie
only to let it flow
in the toss of a flicker.
Act two, busy.
Act three, still keeping busy.
Act four, finished.
Back to modesty.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

Aww, never underestimate the prowess of a woman. In the bedroom or the kitchen! That's some word finesse you've got going there, Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you Kelly and you are so right.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Her stage, her rules, her show. Let it run it her way. If you are the audience of one it's doubtless you won't be a very harsh critic. But I like the demure. Great read, F.

[andrew mitchell]

Belated thank you Fabian and for your words of wisdom.

[Stella Armour]

Act one, the promise of things to come followed ( not too swiftly) by the tease and tempting.
Act two, very imaginative to last into act three before the the final encore .
I actually enjoyed act four best watching the smile and redress of modesty .....

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Stella for supporting the acts of humour.

[Stella Armour]

Lol, my imagination got a bit carried away there 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

I am old and I know now. The treat of a woman stripping. A honored and remembered gift. I did enjoy the tale in the poetry Andrew. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Andra Davis]

Hey its a clever write. Wish I could write like this.

[andrew mitchell]

You are too kind Andra. If I can do this you can too.

[John the Baptist]

I would like a more graphic rerun of acts two and three. Pictures would be nice.

[andrew mitchell]

Scrabble, cards, chess and draughts. Thanks John for the smile.

[Sami Khalil]

I can honestly say that you are good at story-telling and philosophizing: add in humour and you got a good recipe. I hope we are talking here about Marilyn Monroe???

[andrew mitchell]

B. Bardot,, Jane Fonda, Rachel Welsh, and that girl from the movie the deep, can't think of her name. Just to name a few lol. Thanks Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe
You are getting deep.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Andrew… a Canopy of Lace and Desire where Ties are broken to be free in Dreams of tender moments of Ecstacy… softly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear Pat