Dots away!

When life is

just joining the dots.

Hey you! Get off of my dot!

Excuse me! This is my dot!

Dot off buddy!

Oh! Hello cutie! I like your dot.

You can stay on my dot as long as you like.

Are you trying to dot on me?

Why yes! Don’t you think our dots are aligned?

No! I think you’re dotty.

Free dot anyone? Anyone?

Sorry I’m about to be joined.

Oh! Good for you!

Goodbye! Dot away!

Hi! Who are you?

I’m your saviour. My name is pencil.

How about we make 

some dots together?

Oh yes please! Colour me in!

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I absolutely love this poem of doting connecting and coloring. Life is like the old connect the dots only as you say in this poem some time we are told to dot off or stay away this is my dot.

Gave me a bit of a smile but there is so much truth to this as well!! Great insightful own with some twists of humor added in

[andrew mitchell]

Why thank you very much for a delightful review PB

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. I pictured people sitting on dots saying their different comment you had posted above. It was a fun read for me!!

[Robert James]

iTS NICE TO SEE SOMEONE HAVING FUN WITH WORDS. Even if the word is but a Dot. And with life as well. Thank you for the smile you brought. Color me in.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Robert.

[Thomas W Case]

Fantastic work and extremely creative. Excellent.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Thomas

[Sami Khalil]

Excellent message and comparison to different scenarios. Do you mean to dot the landscape of poetry with wise poems, funny poems and romance poems.
Full stop!

[andrew mitchell]

Now that’s an idea Sami, thanks for the visit.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr.
You are welcome

[emmajoygreen]

You are such an imaginative writer and - not at all dotty, Andrew. Now for the hyphen?

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much em for your kind words and the smile.

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome for both.