Just stringing along

When I pulled your string
It was shorter than expected
But only time knew.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I call this poem, Slapped in the Pool. (I'd seen the strings on talking dolls and I really only wanted to share some conversation./ But the string I pulled was to her bikini top and that ended all chance of further relations.) (laughing) We must be careful pulling strings though, all sorts of things can come unraveled. I enjoyed the read.

[andrew mitchell]

Enjoyed your review Fabian. Thank you very much.

[mou]

I feel expectations have a mission to fail our beliefs. True, ultimately time reveals the story. Another subtle and multidimensional write, AM
- mou

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you mou for your kind words.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Andrew… we are like Kites that soar over Rivers… and fields of Heather. Thank you for sharing. gently, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pat for your kind words

[Sami Khalil]

I hope you don't get dooped by politicians or by the news. Beware my friend.

[andrew mitchell]

Hahahahahaha thanks Sami I won't

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome Great Emperor!