A break in the line

A break in the line

A Poem by andrew mitchell

In sync with your verse
I felt the flow
your metre I followed
mere stepping stones.

But alas,
the life line thrown
had no swing
our connection threaded,
you would only
drop a line,
and then hang up.


© 2024 andrew mitchell


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Wow .. that is some very concise and powerful line writes. Love the power brevity that you have composed here, Andrew.

Posted 7 Months Ago
Wow .. that is some very concise and powerful line writes. Love the power brevity that you have composed here, Andrew.

Posted 7 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much Pryde.

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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