The outpourings

My thoughts
are no more
but of a ventriloquist mind
the out pouring
from a clouded gathering
staring at space
in search of what was
only to be left
a puppet from
my own creation
dangling in
the nothingness.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Brilliant analogy. I like to watch Jeff Dunham. I like Andrew's poetry more; concise, whimsical, truthful, clever.
Long live the Emperor of Great Australia.

[andrew mitchell]

You are too kind Sami, thank you my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. You are welcome sir Andrew.

[Ken Simm.]

Very profound and whimsical at the same time. Which is a very difficult thing to do successfully. You have succeded.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ken, appreciate your visit from a gifted artist that you are.