You’re grounded

A place of death
was common ground
while life’s journey
was unknown.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a poignant reflection on the nature of life and death, and the idea that death is something that we all share, regardless of our individual paths in life. The use of the phrase "common ground" is particularly striking, as it suggests that death is something that unites us all, regardless of our differences.

The idea that life's journey is unknown is also very powerful, as it speaks to the idea that life is full of uncertainty and unpredictability, and that we must make the most of the time that we have. The use of the word "journey" is also very evocative, as it suggests that life is a voyage that we must undertake, and that we must navigate the twists and turns of fate as best we can.

Overall, I believe that your poem is a beautiful tribute to the fragility and preciousness of life, and to the idea that we must cherish every moment that we have. It is a reminder that death is an inevitability that we must all face, but that in facing it, we can find a sense of unity and common purpose that transcends our individual differences.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet for such a generous review.