Swinging from a verse that’s fragile

Don’t swing from a line
that holds the stanza
the break could send
the title flying
with grammar
in all directions
where no full stop
will save you.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and yet we continue to fly through a stream of consciousness...
perilously whipping about...

the hell with "periods"!

[andrew mitchell]

Haha thanks for the smile J.

[Ken Simm.]

A great warning that I will try very much to remember.

[andrew mitchell]

Haha thanks for entertaining my nonsense Ken, cheers.