My trigger is mine, only

My intentions are
not to kill,
but my aim is true,
and so my bullet
speaks for himself.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

My Mafia father told me. Don't pull a gun out, unless you willing to shoot now. Good evening Andrew. Nice dance of words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

This reminds me of:" Actions speak louder than words. The proof is in the pudding."
I THINK you are a straight shooter my friend. Long live the Emperor of worthy poetry.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Sami , you are too kind.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome my good friend.

[Sami Khalil]

This reminds me of:" Actions speak louder than words. The proof is in the pudding."
I THINK you are a straight shooter my friend. Long live the Emperor of worthy poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting conundrum expressed here.
so do guns really kill people?
do they not care what we intend?

[andrew mitchell]

When used, they do of course. A bullet is like a carrier pigeon delivering the final message, it represents the thought behind the action. That’s what I was trying to convey. Thank you J.