Balanced on the pinnacle of your thoughts

I cannot claim
to be the face
you hold as security
in your dreams
for I am no more
a shadow of falling
autumn leaves
that disappear
in the mist
of your thinking.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I like this one Andrew. There is a poignancy about it. Nice bit of brevity.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Thank youChris, much appreciated and have a good Easter.

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeously written. Amazingly given. Spontaneously woven.

[andrew mitchell]

Hahaha are you mocking my writes Sami lol. Thank you for your kind words , most generous.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrr. You are welcome Emperor Andrew...