Below the door’s arch

The warmth of the hello
on opening
is swept away
by the goodbye
on closing.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! The power and contrast between the "hello" and "goodbye " .
There is also the difference between "welcome" and good riddance" .
The Emperor of poetry!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Sami for your generous praise, much appreciated. Not bad one review out of 84 lol.

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe. Same here. No worries. Some can't see quality with depth. You are welcome.
They want silly, stupid works .