Poetic path closed ahead

Spent the day in verse
a play on words
I stanza corrected
the sentence placed
upon my lines
had a period,
full stop.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Ha! I loved the line, "I stanza corrected" it sounds so Italian in its delivery like a pizza coming to the front door. Such a light-hearted and enjoyable read. F.

[Red Brick Keshner]

At the intersection
having come full stop
waiting, biding, antsy
'til that light turns green!

[andrew mitchell]

Haha thank you Fred.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, I have come to a full stop once too often.
and it ain't easy cause my pen's brake pads are pretty worn.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Not you Jacob, no way!