Tickety boo!

Do not travel my path
laid before me
for that will truely lead
to your own death
but forge ahead
on the path
of immortality
as collected memories
become enchanted dreams
where the extension of time
stretches without an end.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I enjoyed the read, Andrew, so much so that I thought of a poetic reply. We must each sort out our own salvation, not giving in to that temptation, to follow the footsteps of others and thus, we must follow the path God made for us. "A man’s heart plans his way, But the LORD directs his steps." Proverbs 16:9

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Fabian for your input and time, much appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

I like to be like you when I grow older: on the path of greatness like yourself.
You are rich in the mind, heart and that should be an example to all..................

[andrew mitchell]

No you don’t want to be like me because you wouldn’t get many reviews Sami lol. Continue as you are King Sami, your sonnets are good as are your poetic pieces. If you didn’t stop by I wouldn’t have a review so you are greatly appreciated.

[Sami Khalil]

Some fools don't see value when they see it. You are valuable and valued in my book. You are welcome.

[Tom]

Yes indeed, we each must make our way from beginnings and onwards through life's highways, its up, downs and in between plateaus, to hitch a ride and freeload behind another is tantamount to a mortal, erroneous ending, tickety boo...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your words Tom.