It's like this

I am told to believe
in the impossible,
and yet I haven't
met the invisible man
but I have felt
insignificant.

Reviews

[Scott Andrews]

I think you have captured the feeling we all share in the modern world. As attention spans get shorter and shorter it proves to me more and more difficult to be noticed. A feeling of insignifance can strike us all at any time of life.

Have you considered changing the first invisible to impossible? I wonder if it wouldn't make the invisible man somehow of greater meaning.

Great work!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Scott, my reference of invisible was referring to this elusive God of ours we are told to believe in.

[Scott Andrews]

That's what I suspected and that's why impossible came to mind. As a devout atheist I can absolutely feel the sentiment of your writing.

[Chris Shaw]

I think all of us can feel insignificant at times, but I find it hard to believe in anything I can’t see. That’s why I struggle with organised religion. Hope all is good with you Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

The money those evangelists are making from people almost brainwashed into believing is astounding. Guy Sebastian was a Christian follower but threw in the towel when he was told gays are bad etc and his best friends are gay and are nice people. I can’t stand the double standards and the bigotry of these religions condemning those who do not meet their standards. A lot of the top bigwigs of religion are so full of hate more than anything. I’m good but the year hasn’t been a good start. Hope you are ok too.

[Chris Shaw]

Agree with you on religion. Hope your year improves Andrew. All reasonable here.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Chris.