On collision course

On collision course

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Over to him.
He said. Your behaviour
changed my attitude.

Over to her.
She said. Your attitude
changed my behaviour.

Behavioural patterns
go full circle
on life’s carousel
neither could find
a station to get off.

The conductor
was unavailable
for comment.

© 2023 andrew mitchell


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Oh, the conundrum of life! And the beat goes on...

A good weekend to you, Andrew!

Posted 1 Year Ago


All the fun of the fair. Life’s carousel. Many find an escape route, others don’t. A slice of life Andrew.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Exactly Chris all the fun of the fair! Thanks Chris lol/😀
Enjoyed the read, much to consider / contemplate/ quite a nice ouroboros. Thanks for the post. -carl

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thank you carl
And it still goes round in circles. This at times can be a never ending cycle. I like the feel of this poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thank you will

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Added on February 24, 2023
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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