Abandoned

Everyone will find
fault in you
and then add some.
So I followed my fault line
in the hope of finding perfection.
I only found disappointment
abandoned
my self esteem
had run away.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

my heart is breaking wise ol' Andrew! my heart is breaking .. really like this one! love the word play and analogy ... poke around in a fault line long enough the earth just may split clean open!
E.

[Richard Knox]

So true! Well-said in just a few succinct lines.

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes; impactful philosophical write. The pursuit of perfection leads to perfect obliteration.

Super smart write.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pryde

[John the Baptist]

The pursuit of perfection seldom leads to anything other than an amplification of our faults. The higher you rise, the further you fall.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes you are right John, perfection is exactly that. Thanks for reviewing.

[Patricia Wedel]

I am always Chasing my Halo down the Street..
only to find it waiting for me on the Corner of
Eternity. Pleasantly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Haha so sweet Pat. What a comic u r.🙂

[Chris Shaw]

Not one of us is perfect. Each one of us has faults. Best remember that when we feel others are finding ours. They have theirs too. Don't let the b******s get you down my Dad would say. Happy Monday Andrew.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Chris, it’s pretty much fiction but work is a cut throat business .

[Chris Shaw]

If it's to do with the work place, my DaD's comment even more relevant:) )