The split in all seasons.

Her love was evergreen,
well, that’s what I thought.
Upon her autumn love
which fell from great heights,
she hibernated.
I never saw her again...
until summer on a beach,
I spotted her lying bare.
I wondered who
she would drop this
autumn season...
in her golds and browns,
she was so seasonal.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The girls of summer with tanned legs and bleached blond hair, what's not to appreciate. I enjoyed the read.

[andrew mitchell]

Girls of summer nice! Thank you Fabian.

[Stella Armour]

personalized she is a beauty for all seasons , even when she is stripped bare ..

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much Stella.

[Poetic Beauty]

This sounds like a lady who has a new lover with each season and whether he knew it or not he’d be dropped before Halloween lol I liked this write and the comparison of it to the seasons and their change

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Poetic beauty. Yes a new lover indeed for the new seasons.

[Poetic Beauty]

It was written very creatively

[Betty Hermelee]

You 're turning nature into a live person... both living creatures, a tree and a person...and a nice metaphor, perhaps your muse... hibernates in winter, but so do we, in a way....and then when autumn appears we flock to the hills and fields to see the array of golden colors...fall from the trees...Nice!
Warmly, B

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Betty for a lovely review.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Andrew
Warmly, B