Hello! Can you hear me?

Excuse me!

This is not the place

I had in mind.

Hello!

Is anybody listening?

I'm in the wrong place!

Hello! You there!

Look there's been a mistake.

I'm not suppose to be here.

The problems of trying

to explain oneself

when one is dead on arrival.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

No one is listening. Too late to attract their attention now. Final stanza explains all. Interesting poem Andrew. Made me pause and think.

Chris

[Katerina Felinova]

Short, sweet and too the point. Ending statement really drives the poem home and leaves you feeling like... damn. Very nice!

[barleygirl]

This is exactly how it can feel on social media, to me, half the time! I wonder why I even do Facebook, since I could care less about the opinionated, trivial postings mostly posted there . . . postings about friends' abundant medications & ailments & other gripes . . . and similarly nobody gives a hoot about my bizarre rantings in verse! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting concept. c:

[Coyote Poetry]

Old Grandpa saying. Don't talk to people who don't listen. Last lines, said it all my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry Andrew.
Coyote