A pub with no name.

In the flow
of liquid amber
drunken thoughts
gather no sense
in an orchestrated stutter
the reflection from
the empty glass
shines on in the dimly lit
mind sitting in the corner.

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

i can see this image so clearly , and the amber of dying light glowing through the amber of the beer in the glass ... A lonely figure you have painted.

[Grace]

If you've never seen a light slowly going out, then the pub's the place to see one. Loved the way you described this.

Grace.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Grace

[Chris Shaw]

There is many an English pub I have visited and seen this scene. The lone drinker in the corner, enjoying his pint.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Indeed Chris, a watering hole for some.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nicely descriptive of the lone drinker sir! Have you been watching me?
An enjoyable free verse and excellent descriptive word choice Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

I thought it was you! Lol thank you John for your kind words!

[free will]

This takes my memories to the dimly lit mind in corner. Welldone

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you free will.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Did I hear someone say long island.

[andrew mitchell]

THank you Cherrie

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Great write love it thanks

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

I been to this Pub. Good long Island ice teas. I enjoyed this poem Andrew.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John. I think you have been everywhere.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

At least the pubs. You are welcome Andrew.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i've been through bar on a horse with no name...my trot is off kilter...i am a drunken colt without the wherewithal or balance to bolt.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

haha very nicely put Jacob

[barleygirl]

I've not been much of a drinker, no favorite pub visited often, but I did tend bar here & there, so I catch your picture vividly. Annette & I love the song "Horse With No Name" (America) & we are always working that line in somewhere. This is a perfect fit becuz the scene you describe so starkly, this is exactly how it feels to be riding thru life on a Horse With No Name! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for a lovely review Margie