In the assembly of clouds.

Gather around everyone
I don’t want any partings!
Okay Clouds, can I have
your full attention.
I have called this assembly today
because blue sky has complained
about our graffiti sprayed
all over his atmosphere.
Blue sky wishes to remain alone
in full view with no obstructions.
Secondly, some of you have been making faces
and rude gestures again according to
the humans looking up at the sky..
You know this is not on!
When will you all learn!
Thirdly, some of you
not mentioning any names Nimbus
have been peeing on the residents
of Earth below. Not nice at all and
stop making up a storm.
So, in closing we all have to disappear
until further notice, so start parting now!
Hey you, at the back!
Yes you Cotton wool!
This is a real cloud meeting,
so get lost, off with you.
Meeting is now closed.
Dismissed!

Reviews

[Anjali]

Creative writings like these make the images in my mind run to the wild. This piece of writing is such a refreshing snack to satiate my appetite.

[Re-Pete]

Lol. good one andrew. very creative. now i know where 'acid rain' comes from. i hope that 'cloud nine' doesn't have to go - i like hanging out on it ...

[andrew mitchell]

We all as kids lied on the grass looking up at clouds and their faces. I was so disappointed when I found out you couldn’t walk on clouds. Thanks Pete.

[KWP]

Those clouds can pee on our farmers any day :) Send them inland, they have work to do.

[andrew mitchell]

indeed liz a sad affair!

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Another creative write, Andrew.

It sure is funny how the clouds do resemble other worldly things at times. Quite often they have a habit of resembling parts of the anatomy! It always raises a chuckle in me, just as this write of yours has. As always, your creativity knows no bounds. Keep them coming.

[andrew mitchell]

thanks doodley, i never know if my writing is bad through a couple of polite reviews or the lack of reviews in general and or the fact i'm disliked here. lol so thanks for the encouragement.

[Onlyme]

Entertainingly amazing Andrew. You sure did tickle my funny bone on this one.

[andrew mitchell]

i hope so Dawn, Thank you for your kind words.