The wall technology built!

Met this girl

just the other day,

I wanted to tell her

how great she was....

however I was told 

that would be sexist.

I wanted to tell her

she had the most beautiful eyes,

her mouth so inviting,

the contours of her face so soft,

her legs so long and smooth

I could go on....

but I was told

that would be sexist.

I wanted to say 

how attracted I was.

She was the apple of my eye

but I was told

I was giving

fruit a bad name.

Anyway, we couldn't have sex

that would be sexist.

Then she replied she felt nothing,

and that feeling sexy was sexist.

We ended up walking away

with societies values

weighing heavily

on our shoulders,

we had become sexless.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

As society rides the me two wave I feel the fortunate dream of a women loving me! This insight brings sadness to another level.

Regards,
Al

[andrew mitchell]

Very sad indeed Al, thanks for reading.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So clever and frighteningly true Andrew. Your poem points out how, in destroying old walls, we have built many new ones. Great write!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Annette, courting has changed now!

[Paul Bell]

Where did it all go wrong?
You're pulled. Oops, five years in jail.
Could I pull you? Oops, three years in jail.
Should I write you a letter of intent? Jesus, jailed for life.
Celibacy is the way ahead for both sexes now.

[andrew mitchell]

lol Thanks Paul, I suppose cyber sex is the new thing for the future!

[Paul Bell]

You would think so.

[Neville]

Well said sir... very well said indeed.. if I was not the hard man I am, I would send ya a big wet sloppy Y... wot d'ya mean y.... coz an x would be sexist :) y

[andrew mitchell]

haha Neville the king of wit! Thank you for reviewing my friend.

[Neville]

always a pleasure sir :) yy

[DIVYA]

A powerful comment on how mindful we are becoming of everything nowadays, Andrew. One has to be so careful, I would liken it to almost walking in a minefield. Where has spontaneity gone! Appreciated very much.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Divya, yes it’s becoming an isolated world with the sexes somewhat desensitised.

[DIVYA]

With both sexes increasingy taking on each other’s roles, the mutual needs are diminishing. You’re welcome Andrew.