When beauty is not refundable!

What is old age
but a great divide
between the young
and a haunted place.

Reviews

[Re-Pete]

sure are making us think outside of the box andrew. if it was, there should would be a long line at the return counter. not me of course ... :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pete

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend.
"between the young
and a haunted place"
I did like these words and thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.

[silentwriter180]

Interesting thought. I'll have to remember that.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely lines Andrew. Much to ponder on and reflect. I still have my sight and I see beauty everywhere and I'm thankful for that.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Chris:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Andrew... I hear footsteps on the stairs of memory... and music in my heart... thankful for the gift of sight. Your poetry is a shadow of the stars. truly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pat how kind of you!

[Patricia Wedel]

You are welcome Andrew... as we age it is rather haunting... very poetic of you to “coin” a feeling in three quarters time... like melodies divine. truly, Pat

[barleygirl]

Nicely thought-provoking! I love it when poets say things that are completely fresh & unexpected like this. We all get stuck in repetitive thinking & such a concept pushes us to explore more mentally (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[andrew mitchell]

Wow many kind thanks Margie for stopping by and leaving a word or two. I am honoured.Smiles from me.😀😀😀