The horizon of goodbye blues.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The fading hello

diminishing. sinking

sunset in view

the cold of farewell

lingers clouds brooding

grey echoes rains

lightening the final

strike of goodbye blues.

© 2017 andrew mitchell

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Annette Pisano-Higley

Love the metaphor use and stormy imagery of your words here. Brief lines as though pain of goodbye is choking off word flow with tears. Great flow, cadence. Perfect!

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

Thank you Annette for your lovely words and visit.

Coyote Poetry

A goodbye. Never sweet or wanted. We learn with life and final goodbye. Less goodbyes and more hellos. Powerful use of words my friend. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

You are right john and life is like that.thank you my friend for reading and commenting.

7 Years Ago

You are welcome Andrew.

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Added on October 13, 2017
Last Updated on October 13, 2017

Author

andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia

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