Knock!Knock!

Knock! Knock!
Who's there?
God!
God who?
Oops, sorry! Wrong number!

Reviews

[Hebe]

Superb ... what an image I got ! loved it :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Hebe glad you enjoyed as much as I did lol

[Ayvid N]

I like to believe God is slowly giving up on the unbelievers...A great poem that conveys so much in so few words.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet!

[Ayvid N]

You are welcome. I am inspired by your elegant style of writing. It convinces me that less is more.

[andrew mitchell]

Well thank you for your kind words only sometimes its elegant lol

[Adam Adams]

Quite some refreshing words you've come up with. You must add this to movie scene, any script writing, if you working on. Would be a great turn to "Knock! Knock!"

[andrew mitchell]

haha if only

[andrew mitchell]

thank you adams

[Adam Adams]

Lol.. of course, "if only". Well, you have a very positive sense of humor, Andrew. Try getting your hands dirty at something big. You sure gonna find success at.. whatever you gonna choose. Go with the flow, my friend.

[Poetic Beauty]

The last line says a lot. It is blunt

[andrew mitchell]

thank you pb

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Although there's no direct line of descent, it's possible that the birth of "Knock Knock" jokes in the dim recesses of our century owes more than a little to the famous "porter scene" in Macbeth. The clownish porter tends the gate at Macbeth's castle, where that notable thane has just successfully murdered the king of Scotland. In the previous scene, in which Macbeth and his wife complete the deed, the knocking sounds that eventually rouse the porter scare the conspiratorial couple out of their wits: knocking is the sound that crystallizes their guilt. The porter's joking reference to "Hell Gate" has, then, some resonance: Macbeth's castle is and will remain the diabolical duo's headquarters, and the scene of numerous hideous crimes. The joke also refers obliquely to an earlier dramatic form in which Hell Gate was an actual prop, and in which the drama of temptation, sin, salvation, and damnation was materialised to edify the common people, Macbeth supplies the tradition with psychological depth. So … what’s all this to do with your short sweet write – well - you could have knocked on the wrong door! Loved the piece really …

[andrew mitchell]

this is a mammoth review, thank you phil, what a wealth of information you are. thanks again for sharing.

[Seeker]

Brief, but brought a smile. Very perceptive.

[andrew mitchell]

thanks seeker just fun.

[Seeker]

Which is just as it should be.

[Anjali]

A poem on a lighter note. It brought smile :)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for reading lol

[Relic]

Witty and fun. I'd have plenty of questions if he'd stay on the line. :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol Relic. I'm glad you are still on this site and weathered the storms!

[Norman 223]

Whoops ! Nice one Andrew.
I love it when people write just for the hell of it!!!😈
N.

[andrew mitchell]

yes just a funny tease from a silly ditty of a write in passing thoughts! thank you sir!

[Coyote Poetry]

Some wrong numbers could be important? Nice flow of thoughts left something for the reader to think about. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

thank you john, you are always too kind, i shall review your amazing poetry soon.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome Andrew.