Knock!Knock!
A Poem by
andrew mitchell
Knock! Knock!
Who's there?
God!
God who?
Oops, sorry! Wrong number!
© 2017 andrew mitchell
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Reviews
Reminds me of my father scrubbing carrots in the garden: "Cleanliness is next to gourdliness" he'd say
Posted 6 Years Ago
Nice one dear Really amusing
Posted 6 Years Ago
Nice one dear Really amusing
Is God even there? Sometimes you wonder. Just sometimes.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Is God even there? Sometimes you wonder. Just sometimes.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
lol...wrong numbers can be great distractions sometimes....;)
Keep this going....you could end up on a stage.....
Posted 6 Years Ago
lol...wrong numbers can be great distractions sometimes....;)
Keep this going....you could end up on a stage.....
6 Years Ago
Lol my two minutes of fame!
Hahaha thanks for the laugh
Posted 6 Years Ago
Hahaha thanks for the laugh
6 Years Ago
Thank you Dotty just having ridiculous fun! :)
Or, he might have been in the wrong universe.
This was a good one. :)100
Posted 6 Years Ago
Or, he might have been in the wrong universe.
This was a good one. :)100
6 Years Ago
Thanks for reading.
goddammit haha I really needed this lol. I don't know what to say. I feel so sinful laughing at this! omg, look what you did. I feel the need to go to confession, so find me at the nearest bar- I mean I mean... Cafe. Great write, Andrew!
Posted 6 Years Ago
goddammit haha I really needed this lol. I don't know what to say. I feel so sinful laughing at this! omg, look what you did. I feel the need to go to confession, so find me at the nearest bar- I mean I mean... Cafe. Great write, Andrew!
6 Years Ago
lol thanks roma
Oof! Very timely pun. Brief and to the point, but it works well like that.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Oof! Very timely pun. Brief and to the point, but it works well like that.
This was pretty humorous. Thank you for the necessary laughter. I appreciate it.
To the point, and succinct in its delivery. Something like that is admirable.
Posted 6 Years Ago
This was pretty humorous. Thank you for the necessary laughter. I appreciate it.
To the point, and succinct in its delivery. Something like that is admirable.
6 Years Ago
thank you for your words and smiles
I read this yesterday when I needed a serious laugh, but couldn't give my review because of my slow internet, so thank You for gaving me yesterday a needed laugh, and like You, I think many even forget that there is a name of "God", or let us be free enough to say, that there is a "higher power", forget that there is humaniy inside them, a humanity that's a part of the "whole".
Thank You again for a good laugh, for the truth and message that lay behind these wonderful words.
Posted 6 Years Ago
I read this yesterday when I needed a serious laugh, but couldn't give my review because of my slow internet, so thank You for gaving me yesterday a needed laugh, and like You, I think many even forget that there is a name of "God", or let us be free enough to say, that there is a "higher power", forget that there is humaniy inside them, a humanity that's a part of the "whole".
Thank You again for a good laugh, for the truth and message that lay behind these wonderful words.
6 Years Ago
I thank you too for the smile for your words.
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andrew mitchell adelaide, Australia
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" When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,..
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