It didn't matter.

The opportunistic wave
was missed,
but it didn't matter,
the next bus
was in thirty minutes.

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

There's no chance of that bus turning up in thirty minutes. Life just doesn't work that way. Three Buses will turn up, totally confusing you into walking home.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Paul for reading, yes life is based around opportunities some lost in hesitation.

[Tony Jordan]

So true.
Im reminded of the revolving fashions industry and how I should have gone into fashion designing lol - they seem to just look back at old pics and regurgitate the clothes and furniture (says me sitting on a leather armchair with long legs and brass feet like the 70's lol)

[andrew mitchell]

lol thank you Tony :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like the logic of this poem my friend. Thank you Andrew for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

thanks john lol

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.

[Ruth]

Reminds the reader to grab life, the chance is said to be missed often but if something is meant to be, it will come around again, nicely done hon :)

[andrew mitchell]

ta poppy exactly the message as simple as it is, it has more depth in its meaning broadened.

[Ruth]

I find a lot of meaning in your pieces...they swirl in my mind long after reading :) My pleasure hon :)

[ruth]

I absolutely enjoyed this. Even though it was short, it really captured my attention. It seemed like it was going to be a whole big thing, but it was just a missed bus. Wow. I'm speechless but there's so much to say. Amazing.

[andrew mitchell]

Weak as it is, its not just about buses but missed opportunities as a whole, you missed it ...

[ruth]

Aw man. I knew I missed something. I still like to think of the simplicity though.

[andrew mitchell]

one is always simple if one thinks simple, you should write more considering your lack of time and maybe less reviews RUTH!!!!

[ruth]

ah you caught me