Lock it in Mr. Sulu, fate lies ahead.

Lock it in Mr. Sulu, fate lies ahead.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Lock it in Mr Sulu, fate lies ahead.
I know our paths will cross,
we were made for this collision, fate.
You just don't know it yet!
But the update suggests,
we're still travelling
on a course that's
parallel together,
but the summit's ahead,
the apex in view.
I've fastened my seatbelt!
Lock it in Mr Sulu.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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"Where no man has gone before". "These are its voyages and its adventures." "Live long and prosper."

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

thanks for reading pete.
Pete

7 Years Ago

You're welcome andrew.
Sulu went ape-s**t with the sword and that but jeez did you see his body!!
I wish fate lay behind us. That would be interesting Andrew.
Fate, like Mr Trump, has wayyy too much power for my liking.


Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

thank you tony for your words
those unknown journeys wait for all of us....I like the different angles of "unknown" you have painted with this one....

"But the summits ahead" - did you mean summit's, as in one summit? Somehow "summits" sounds a bit out of place......

Posted 7 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

7 Years Ago

Thank you SV for your comments, your visit and your help.:):)

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