Time ticks on tock unforgiving.

Time ticks on tock unforgiving.

In an emporium of young eyes

        watching,

   no eye contact was

          

           made.

He had crossed over 

         to old age.

      With the party 

          now over,

         time stole

   his sexual charisma.

Reviews

[Valentine]

No eye contact, no flirty smiles, gee, have to stay with the one you have. [smiling] Valentine

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and yet some just won't admit it...they still of themselves as young and insatiable....and feel others see them as such...great catches...yet they long ago outlived their worth of captivity..

j.

[andrew mitchell]

I think its hard to let go of the idea that loving a beautiful young woman is over when that bridge of the age gap is severed for ever. I based this write somewhat on the movie Lolita.

[Gee]

Like this, written for me ?

[andrew mitchell]

maybe you and me both!!