What made her tick, her time piece exquisite?

What made her tick, her time piece exquisite?

She was introduced

as very complex,

layered....

with flavours and textures.

Being high quality,

I always pushed her

envelope hard, stopping

before tearing it.

That was just how

the love was....

raw, urgent.

She left no doubt

on desires spent, bubbling;

I was left wildly fermented. 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

"She was introduced
as very complex,
layered....
with flavours and textures."

this stanza's one of my fav. my wicked and certainly a very vulgar mind imagines something very dirty reading these words. a real royal grande horizontale! -- just popped up in my head, & i watched her vividly dancin' and thumping & nakedly swagging so brightly around... in those words. very imaginative & crystal clear poetry you dripped down this time. liked it... ev'n enjoyed reading it more!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Adam for your words.

[Paul Bell]

Like this. Some woman just tell you what they want. If you don't like it, find another.
But if you do like it. Hold on tight, the trip of a lifetime is just beginning.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Paul. so true!

[Coyote Poetry]

A fast lady with time in sight. She is the boss.
"That was just how
the love was....
raw, urgent."
I liked the above lines. You defined her with perfect skill. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Why thank you John for your kind words and your visit.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.